User blog comment:Chrismh/Everybody's Coord Design! Round 2: Repaying Kindness!/@comment-15568664-20181112203007/@comment-3237624-20181112210153

I feel bad because it looks like you tried this time, but you broke 2 of Mariko's rules; she might be up for anything, but the point is to not use things she dislikes. She doesn't like outfits with pants, and she doesn't like dark colors and there's just too much of it on the top; it doesn't help that it looks black.

However, since you did try, I'll rate the coord without taking the rules into consideration- but you won't have a chance for top 3 because that wouldn't be fair to everyone else who stuck to the rules. This coord is a lot better than your first try, everything looks great together. I wish the flowers weren't on the shoes though because they don't really go with anything on the coord. This outfit kind of reminds me of something a sexy-type Idol would wear, but with cool-type colors.

8 out of 10. While I like the the shoes with the coord, the flowers painfully stick out and just look a bit silly. It's a shame you didn't follow the rules this time XD