User blog comment:Chrismh/Everybody's Coord Design! Round 4: Classical Mirage/@comment-34700135-20181125213347/@comment-3237624-20181126232639

All of the pieces look lovely together in terms of style, and I can see you did follow the rules, but for some reason to me, I don't get a... sense of what this coord represents. Like looking at the others I could say it's "sexy but with a cute color scheme/style" or "it looks like a Classical Ange coord". It looks fairly neutral I guess I could say.

I like each piece separately, but I can't find any balance due to the colors. Like, the top and accessory are a great pair. The skirt kinda works with it (namely because the purple of the skirt goes with the tiny flower on the top), but the darker colors of the shoes stands out with the softness of the rest of the coord. I also noticed a pattern of silver, gold, silver, gold on each piece, which looks a little strange as both aren't present on the same piece. If they were it'd match better, but that's kind of a rare thing.

6 out of 10. It's not a bad coord, I'd recommend maybe lessening the gold/silver pattern by swapping a piece or two. I feel like it would help it blend a little more.