User blog comment:Chrismh/Everybody's Coord Design! Round 2: Repaying Kindness!/@comment-15568664-20181112031737/@comment-3237624-20181112075705

I'm not trying to sound mean, but... did you really?

It looks like you just took three completely random pieces and stuck them together. If I made these pieces completely white and black, as a whole they would look cute, but like this there are too many contrasting color schemes (vibrant gems for accessories, monotone and darks for the dress, pastels for the shoes) to work. Overall it's kind of unpleasant...

I admit that I could see 2 pieces workings, like maybe the accessory paired with the shoes or dress, MAYBE the dress and shoes... but that's kind of stretching it. The only really saving grace here is that the shoes and dress are definitely items Mariko would wear.

3 out of 10. I feel like if you swapped even one piece of this coord, the score would probably shoot up to a 5-7 at least.